The Story Behind Her Insomnia, poem published by Lynne Knight

      EXPOSITION

      If she wrote to those she had wronged,
      went down on her knees,
      would that be enough to atone?

      You must be doing something wrong.
      Someone come back from the dead
      to rebuke and, to endure.

      Even the rain won't ease her.
      It beats so hard she fears wash-out,
      ruin, the house tumbling down the hillside,

      the bed crashing into the coast oaks,
      a tangle of blankets and limbs.
      You must be doing something wrong.

      RISING ACTION

      Enter sleep potions: warm milk,
      honey, herbs. Enter craving
      for the slow deep

      breath beside her. I barely
      slept, he says. But I heard you.
      I heard you, she says, neither

      believing the other. Doubt
      takes on guises like a dream
      where someone says I barely slept.

      TURNING POINT

      Rain beating on the roof.
      You must have done something wrong.
      His voice, bundled cloth:

            [continued]

      I know if I slept or I didn't.
      Turning away. Turning away:
      both of them, bodies
      in a bed, a photograph of which says
      Rift. Says Look: This is not how they began.
      Neither believing the other's claims

      but disguising their loss
      by claiming it's a dream sleeplessness
      keeps making them enter.

      FALLING ACTION

      Someone walking across a river:
      someone dead, or her feet would displace
      the water: You must be

      doing something wrong. She reaches
      to touch him, as if the dream keeping him
      so quiet might be hers.

      I’m sleeping, can’t you see I’m sleeping.
      This is not how they began—tangled in
      each other's limbs, the bed a ruin,

      DÉNOUEMENT

      yet a quieter love has survived
      everything, has told them no one escapes
      loss, no one gets up from bed without it.



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